Law School Personal Statement I am presently working on my Law School applications and have wrote several statements but feel as though they are not good enough. Therefore, would like to have my personal information organized into a cohesive manner so I

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Law School Personal Statement

I am presently working on my Law School applications and have wrote several statements but feel as though they are not good enough. Therefore, would like to have my personal information organized into a cohesive manner so I can build upon it. I will forward a copy of my vitae and resume for reference, as well as the instructions. I am too stressed out at this point to start another draft only to toss it out.

To Whom It May Concern:

I am writing is letter in support of “(Name)” (Last Name), a former student of mine at the Madera Community College Center. This evaluation is based on our relationship between instructor and student.

I have known (Name) for several years. Within that time (Name) has impressed me on several levels. First, (Name) distinguished herself by her insightful and perceptive comments in class. On various occasions she led class discussions and demonstrated herself as a leader among my students.

Secondly, (Name) has shown her commitment to her community and culture by her work in health camps throughout California; her volunteer work at a local Sikh temple; and currently her work in a women’s shelter.

Finally on a more personal note (Name) has persevered and triumphed through her own trials and tribulations. As an immigrant to the United States at the age of twelve, (Name) has endured the problems of an abusive arranged marriage and managed to be the first in her immediate family to attend college.

(Name)’s work ethic, determination and drive despite her adversities are a vivid testament to her focus, and more importantly, her character. Supplemented with her extensive business background and college experience, and coupled with her goal of becoming an attorney, (Name) is an exemplary individual fully worthy of your support.

In closing, I support (Name) (Last Name) in any endeavor she undertakes—she will be an asset to any school or organization in which she joins. I support (Name) fully and without reservation. If you wish to discuss this recommendation for (Name) (Last Name) further, please feel free to contact me at your convenience.

Sincerely,

Biography

· 2nd of 4 children

· Born and raised in India; moved to U.S. at the age of 12 in 1998; 8th grade

· Father’s education 7th grade and mother’s 5th

· First to attend high school and graduate 2003

· First to attend college

· Been working 30-40 hours a week since the age of 15

· Arranged marriage at the age of 19 (Dec. 2004) to a man in India which ended 2006 due to abuse

· Dropped out of school in order to pay for his education; was given no other choice

· Parents were against the divorce because it went against the cultural norms and considered a dishonor for both the family and the girl

· Went back to school part time in 2007; worked full time

Volunteer/Community Work

· Bhagat Puran Singh Health Initiative March 2011-Present

· Health camps throughout California at community centers offering free health awareness with the aid of Doctors, Dentists, and Optometrists; provide basic healthcare screening and general health/nutrition advice to undeserved and neglected communities. Increase awareness of heart disease and diabetes among the at-risk populations and promote general health knowledge to prevent chronic disease

· Sikh Student Association-California State University, Sacramento September 2010-Present

· The purpose of this organization is to share and promote Sikh culture, history and heritage in order to create a more diverse and unified campus. Organize various events and informative booths to raise awareness of other minority groups and cultures amongst the student body. Presently working on initiating a Feed the Hungry campaign

· Volunteer at the local Sikh Temple teaching Sunday school for the Punjabi language

· Nanaksar Sikh Temple, Fresno 2004-2010 Sunday school teacher volunteer and fundraising/food collection for the holidays and other events

· Naomi’s House Homeless Women’s Shelter 2005

· In addition to shelter, the women are provided with Poverello House/Holy Cross Center for Women Campus services – meals, showers, laundry and medical/dental care. Other services at Naomi’s House include a strengths-based needs assessment, goal planning, social service advocacy, case management, limited transportation and education regarding issues endemic to women and homelessness.

· Poverello House, Fresno 2002-2003 Food collection through Central High School food drive